热度 2已有 214 次阅读2011-5-25 14:53 |个人分类:拂晓花儿开
sdan
sdan: 好诗,意境不错,句句押韵,这在诗体上叫“柏梁体”。你写诗的意境和用词均不错,好过我,古体诗讲究押韵,以后贴在主板(原创文学)栏目时注意一下韵脚(押韵) ...
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